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  • phillip
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    a few shots of a wedding that i was at yesterday

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    Karen & Sean by phillipcullinane, on Flickr

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    Karen & Sean-2 by phillipcullinane, on Flickr

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    Karen & Sean-3 by phillipcullinane, on Flickr

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    Karen & Sean-4 by phillipcullinane, on Flickr

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    Karen & Sean-5 by phillipcullinane, on Flickr

    C&C welcome. but take it easy as i am still recovering

    phillip

    Cookster
    Participant

    Hi Philip,

    63 views and no comments yet – is that posetive or are people just nosey.

    My comments are less about the technical and more about how I would percieve them if they were my wedding photos and I was selecting them for my album.

    #1: People in background windows could be blown out – why are they not watching me walk up the aisle she says?

    #2: Crop feels a bit tight to me – I’d like to see their feet and some of the alter – Also they’re not all looking at you, or even in your direction. I was at a wedding in the UK where the photographer had a rubber duck on a stick that he held up when he wanted the group to look at him.

    #3:Pity she’s not looking at you too cos he’s giving you the money shot. You seem to be a bit off centre for this one and #1 which loses a bit of impact for me. Your text at the bottom of the image is a different size and the web address is missing a “W” (picky, I know)

    #4: Nice shotof the couple but to crop or dodge out the Muso in background and the man on right are prob too much hassle – Nice moment but not an album shot

    #5: Well it is her day – of course she should indulge. This is a nice moment, well caught.

    Hope I’m not too critical here and that my observations help. Am I right to presume you were not the official photographer on the day, hence the hangover….

    All the best

    Sean

    warrner
    Member

    Well…
    All pictures are very nice. Bridal dress is really awesome i loved it. yeah bride and groom are also looking fabulous.
    I’d like to see more pics of this beautiful couple….

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