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phillipMember
a few shots of a wedding that i was at yesterday
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Karen & Sean by phillipcullinane, on Flickr2.
Karen & Sean-2 by phillipcullinane, on Flickr3.
Karen & Sean-3 by phillipcullinane, on Flickr4.
Karen & Sean-4 by phillipcullinane, on Flickr5.
Karen & Sean-5 by phillipcullinane, on FlickrC&C welcome. but take it easy as i am still recovering
phillip
CooksterParticipantHi Philip,
63 views and no comments yet – is that posetive or are people just nosey.
My comments are less about the technical and more about how I would percieve them if they were my wedding photos and I was selecting them for my album.
#1: People in background windows could be blown out – why are they not watching me walk up the aisle she says?
#2: Crop feels a bit tight to me – I’d like to see their feet and some of the alter – Also they’re not all looking at you, or even in your direction. I was at a wedding in the UK where the photographer had a rubber duck on a stick that he held up when he wanted the group to look at him.
#3:Pity she’s not looking at you too cos he’s giving you the money shot. You seem to be a bit off centre for this one and #1 which loses a bit of impact for me. Your text at the bottom of the image is a different size and the web address is missing a “W” (picky, I know)
#4: Nice shotof the couple but to crop or dodge out the Muso in background and the man on right are prob too much hassle – Nice moment but not an album shot
#5: Well it is her day – of course she should indulge. This is a nice moment, well caught.
Hope I’m not too critical here and that my observations help. Am I right to presume you were not the official photographer on the day, hence the hangover….
All the best
Sean
warrnerMemberWell…
All pictures are very nice. Bridal dress is really awesome i loved it. yeah bride and groom are also looking fabulous.
I’d like to see more pics of this beautiful couple….
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