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richie10Member
This is a photo I took last week at the Burrow in Rosslare,I thought i’d try a frame on it to see what it looks like……it was taken on an Olympus 410.RodcunhaParticipantI really like your composition and the panoramic format works really well, however if you allow me some critique, I think it is a tad under exposed and the horizon doesn’t look straight to me either. I think also that the light 15 minutes before this shot was taken must have been great given the colors you’ve got here.
richie10MemberThanks Rodcunha,now that you mention it…the horizon does look funny :(…….I’ll see what other ones i have from that night.But thanks for your comments,thats why i put them up here.
Richie
jodal1975Participantrodcunha took the words right out of my mouth…a good shot , that could have been a brilliant shot with the few little tweaks mentioned. saying that i would have been delighted to have taken it as it is !!! so well done
richie10MemberRodcunha wrote:
I really like your composition and the panoramic format works really well, however if you allow me some critique, I think it is a tad under exposed and the horizon doesn’t look straight to me either. I think also that the light 15 minutes before this shot was taken must have been great given the colors you’ve got here.
I.ve added a second photo which i used some fill light on….Ive done the best i can with horizon and I.m sure its ok now……..its the angle of the shoreline which is making it look slightly off ….I think :?
richie10Memberjodal1975 wrote:
rodcunha took the words right out of my mouth…a good shot , that could have been a brilliant shot with the few little tweaks mentioned. saying that i would have been delighted to have taken it as it is !!! so well done
Thanks very much for your comments …really like getting some feed back…… :)
RodcunhaParticipantThat’s much much better on the 2nd version!
Cracker now… love your boat/man too!
richie10MembersirvadMemberAgain Richie a nice image but again they look a little soft. what exposures were you using?
richie10MemberHi Sirvad…..
Aperture priority/iso 100/F-10/.769secs exposure/55mm.But did notice now that the sharpness is set to soft…….
5faytheParticipantHi Richie,
As has been said this is very nice.
I do think the 2nd version looks better especially when viewing both together.
The “horizon” can look a little odd here as it is a long shoreline.
Well done,
John.
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