I’ve taken a close look at your image and here are my thoughts:
* The composition is pretty decent, no major faults there
* If you look at the histogram for your image you’ll see that there very little on the pure black side. As a result the image looks a bit washy in parts. It also lacks a little contrast. Both can be sorted easily enough in something like Photoshop
* I’d also be tempted to warm this up a little with a Photo Filter in Photoshop
* Maybe a touch of saturation too, bring out some of that colour in the sky
* The choice of font used in the framing is a bit bland and does very little for the image
These are just my thoughts and other opinions may differ. Best of luck.
I’m glad to see you didn’t alter it too much-
I kinda liked the muted tones in the first one-
And perhaps it’d print well- maybe there is a full range of tones in the larger version-