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Winter evening fog
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Superb work – you certainly made the most of the atmospheric conditions!
I’m left wishing there was more foreground interest …. a fence/gate/something in the forground to add a little depth to the composition and break up the large expanse of frosted grass but there wasn’t – nothing you could have done to improve that!
Wow…the fog and light in this are really nice. It’s an excellent shot. I don’t think the composition is quite there though. I think I’d go with less foreground since there isn’t much interest there.
-Doug
Lovely shot, personally I’d disagree with Doug, I really like the long shadows of the trees on the right across the foreground.
KyeBrown wrote:
Lovely shot, personally I’d disagree with Doug, I really like the long shadows of the trees on the right across the foreground.
Yeah, that’s a fair comment, I just felt the amount of sky and amount of foreground were out of balance. If there is additional cropped sky available, adding some of that might work too. I hadn’t spotted the shadow of the tree to be honest…it would be a shame to crop it out.
-Doug
Thanks everyone for you comments
DougL wrote:
Yeah, that’s a fair comment, I just felt the amount of sky and amount of foreground were out of balance. If there is additional cropped sky available, adding some of that might work too. I hadn’t spotted the shadow of the tree to be honest…it would be a shame to crop it out.
-Doug
Here is a photo with more sky
Nos wrote:
Here is a photo with more sky
Hmmmm…that doesn’t quite work either. Now it feels really right heavy to me. Do you mind if I play around with some crops and post them? I’m feel like I’m really struggling with composition right now, and it would be a useful exercise.
-Doug
DougL wrote:
Nos wrote:
Here is a photo with more sky
Hmmmm…that doesn’t quite work either. Now it feels really right heavy to me. Do you mind if I play around with some crops and post them? I’m feel like I’m really struggling with composition right now, and it would be a useful exercise.
-Doug
Sure, go ahead
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