Hi rob, my take on it is, it’s nearly a great photo – IMHO it could do with a wee boost of the pink n’ reds in the sky, not too much mind. Also, the reflection of the cloud seems strangely darker in the water than in the sky, so maybe darkening the cloud in the sky may add something else to it too. And I wonder could you get the ripples in the water more defined by darkening the shadows on the ripple.
I really do think there’s a cracker of a photo just waiting to be “squeezes” out.