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Wrens in the garden
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Hmmm, lots to like here for me personally. I like the background and its colour, creates an interesting mood.
Also like the wrens positions on the branch. Focus and DOF seems good, very sharp. I like the panoramic crop also,
its unusual.Photograph would be better if the bird on the right wasn’t so far down with his feet a bit cropped.
Also the plant in the centre (out of focus) wasn’t there as its a bit of a distraction. Depending on yourself
you could think about cloning it out I guess. Not something I do, but we’re all different.
The bird on the left, pity its back is covered by the upright branch.Still I quite like it despite the improvements :)
What lens were you using ?
MarkI like the soft background. I would cut the left side with the green plant.
Excellent shot,very hard to capture these fellas,they move so quick!I think the youngster takes away from the shot though.
Try a crop with just the bird on the left in it, its a great capture :wink:Cheers one and all for the advice. Major help to the learning curve. Photo was taken with a 350D and a Sigma 70-300mm on a tripod.
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