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yeah its awful hehe
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IMO this may not be the forum for such content seeing as there may be younger members looking at it.
not exactly sure what critiquing you want.. as you said lighting is poor and pic seems to be noisey in parts. hat exactly are you trying to portray here?
The main thing is, for me, the pose that does not correspond to the clothes style.
She is doing a romantic pose and wear fetish clothes… a bit strange.In my humble opinion, the model looks bored and out of place in those clothes. The tint to the scene is red, but it doesnt seem relevant to what I can only imagine you are trying to portray and the picture is horribly noisy.
Id say, if youre going to shoot again, definitely look at some front lighting, get the model to strike up a more relevant pose, consider lowering the iso setting on your camera(noise too high) and maybe change the scene completely to a dungeon or something similar, definitely something more apt.
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