I think you have done a great job. Studio is all about controlling the light, that has never been an issue for you that i could ever remember. Headed back Dallas way any time soon? i could set us up a model, MUA and studio time if you ever get back over here.
Breathtaking! Beautiful pose, and wonderful light. I haven’t seen any of your work for quite some time, maybe even a year or so, but this is by far the best.
I would agree, not soft maybe even a little gritty with the contrast and grain. I really like the image, has a feeling of sitting in the flat with the morning sun shining through the window.
The first one really doesn’t work from me. The lighting ratio is simply too high, with just too little detail where it should be. Second is much better. It could do with a little more punch/contrast and being a touch brighter.. beautiful model.
Glad to see you on the boards again Ciaran. Thanks for the Critique! The first was an experiment. I know what I need to do the next time.
Deebo wrote:
Lack of detail spoil the first one.
The girl on the second one is mega, great lookig girl and lovely shot. skin looks great and great backdrop
Well done
Dee
Thanks Dee appreciate your comments.
summerdreamn wrote:
the first one is very dramatic but i like the second one better. was this in a studio or on location?
This one was Studio.
wirepic wrote:
Two excellent shots. Just can’t make up my mind which I like the most!
Thanks Wirepic!
Sodafarl wrote:
Dratom
Yeah some people are really fortunate. I think the first could be used for a lot of subjects, but does look like a very nice girl, a great figure. The second one I really like,she looks like someone out of hollyoaks ( a compliment). 2 great shots.
No real reason I guess. Beautiful women and a chance to shoot them. I look at the second image in full size it isn’t as dark. It may have been in the resizing and saving a less quality image for posting.
Thanks eas! I appreciate you taking the time to comment!
this is a great shot. i really like the processing and viewpoint.
the plants give a real sense of a stolen moment away from everyone else.
Thanks Summerdream. I did a little different processing to give it a certain fee, wasn’t sure anyone would get it. I thought the leaves in the foreground added to it as well.