Ya I might try that, I left it in to kinda show where they were going, if that makes sense?
Hmmm TO me the first shot lacks a subject, as in theres nothing to focus on so this makes the picture less interesting to me! The second image is a but too grey for my liking. Just my opinions!
well we have another 20 to take and a journal to write which ive done, ive 3 weeks to get this 20 :/