[harambee]

March 11, 2009 at 11:27 pm

that’s a mighty fast Luas :)

[harambee]

March 11, 2009 at 11:19 pm

like the colours in the second image

[harambee]

March 11, 2009 at 11:15 pm

Nice image and model

The darkness of left eye area and as PD Barbs said the merging of the eye and eye lashes – could be the processing of the image? also the motif on the clothing unless it was required for advertising? I too agree the slight cropping of elbow looks accidental and is distracting – a more deliberate crop further removing th empty space to the left might help frame the face better

[harambee]

March 11, 2009 at 11:09 pm

I’d say that was a funny scene darting up and back to your camera – lucky no-one made off with it.

The image is nice and the blurred figure adds interest.

[harambee]

March 11, 2009 at 11:06 pm

Bit of a mixed opinion on these.

The third image for me though the crop is a bit tight particularly on the chin if you had room on original you might try a different crop. On the second image i find the contrasting shadow/highlight between nose and left eye area a bit harsh

[harambee]

March 11, 2009 at 11:01 pm

the expression is classic – happy or unhappy ? should you run away or stay ?

You did well to catch a great moment, its just a pity that guy is behind her, especially where the leg extends from the door keepers hand

[harambee]

March 11, 2009 at 10:57 pm

Nice image, suggest eye contact with camera, as the young lad is looking up and away makes you wander away trying to see what he sees, if that makes sense. Although not always necessary I think it could help here. Just my twopence worth.

[harambee]

March 11, 2009 at 10:53 pm

Lovely set of images and model

the second and fourth images would be my choice for the pose and for displaying the makeup as they feature the face better, however have to agree with the colour differences.