Just to be picky on an excellent work : on my screen I have more road on the bottom of the photograph that room on the top, resulting in a slightly cropped sign and building. While the latter is the subject and you tried to show it all, I would have balanced the composition differently.
The central location of the house doesn’t bother me : I would just have put the house a little bit lower in the composition. The composition works like a charm… good work with the colours too.
That will make a nice baryta print. I would just work on the shadowy parts by gentle touches here and there (the rocks on the top left for instance) : it will add depth to the picture.
I agree with Adam. The hand creates a kind of bouncing effect with the belly that confuses the reader – or at least me – : on my opinion a light in the continuation of the thigh would help.