I think you lose her face in the glare. It’s not bright as in on the screen, but just takes away from the image for me. A dark background would solve it. For me anyway
I thought it was just my tired eyes at first, but you’re right, not as sharp as I thought it was. In hindsight, I realised I wasn’t using manual focus points. Silly me!
I went back into my workflow a few hours later and found a much sharper, better quality image. I used selective coloring on that version. I don’t want to be greedy and post that here as well (unless that’s okay?)