hi. nice shots. i like the black and white ones more. The first and the third are really nicely taken. i couldnt make out the mattress untill you said it later on in the posts. Perhaps it would be better if the texture on the mattress was more obvious. As it is it looks like a slab of rock to me.
hi. i like the first one but ,if you dont mind me saying, it might be better without the younger guy on the left in it. The second one is very martin parr :) especially with the mum with a pint in one hand and the buggy in the other…
hi. nice shots. The first i think would be better with the right hand side cropped out. Leaving it just the three figures on the bench alone in the park. The Second is a nice linear piece. I wondered for a while if it might be better without the man, but actually i think he makes it. The third is a funny little moment, but i think the girl who is looking out at the camera is a little distracting and takes a little from the shot, but i suppose if you had waited for her to pass then the guitarists expression would have changed also.
nice moment captured there. perhaps it needs a little cropping- like the elbow on the right and some of the top too. Just a thought, it would help to focus your eyes more on the boy and the background.
:D Morning everyone, thanks for the congrats and weldone to everyone else too, I really liked number 1 and the portrait but think it would have done better in a portrait competition, but great portrait all the same!! …now to find a good shot for this month…