Hi there. Good effort. 2 and 3 are a bit similar as Ballyman mentioned, so I’d pick your favourite.
#1 is a bit blurry and overexposed, so I’d re-take that one again, if possible as it has good potential. Hope that helps and best of luck with your project.
The only thing I’d watch out for is your horizontal level, i.e. the shot seems to be tilted a couple of degrees to the left. If you use the grid function in Photoshop, it’ll provide a good guideline.
Thanks for the comments, Joe, Dave and Beasley. Joe – you’re right about the watermark. I’ll make a smaller one next week.
Beasley, if you have any insights into navigating the licensing shenanigans, please PM me!! They’re not taking my years of experience into account at all, so I’m back on a provisional, but have no suitable bike and am leery about emasculating my pride and joy. So … even after I pass the smaller capacity test, I’m still hobbled to the small bike for the further 2 years. BTW, my wife is a HUGE VW van fan. I think it harks back to her Grateful Dead days :)
Thanks Beasly – it was the trip of a lifetime for me. I did 6,500 miles in 19 days and met lots of nice people and a few weirdos as well – just to make things interesting. The bike was/is a Ducati ST2 that I brought home with me, but according to the powers that be here in Ireland, I need to go back on a 125cc or similar so I can “learn” how to ride a bike. I assumed that I’d have to do a test, but they really pulled the rug out from under me. Even the RSA admitted that cases like mine had “fallen through the cracks” but licensing changes are now made at the EU level. Ok – end of rant and back to photos. I still have to finish ome of the images, but here’s a small sample.
US Cavalry cemetery at the site of the battle of Little Big Horn:
The first shot came out as intended – a semi-silhouette. The sun is just out of the shot, a little high and to the right.
Second – good point as well. I took several of that set and I do have others where they are both looking at the camera. For some reason, I liked this one though. (Not to worry – the couple have the others as well :)
Third – you’re right. I’ll pay more attention to dress/suit positioning in any future shoots. The bride thought she looked uncomfortable in that shot too – I think she was just straightening her back when I took it :) In all the other bench shots, both she and the groom are facing the camera and smiling. For my own (somewhat intangible) reasons, I like images that are just a little bit quirky. I did explain to the couple before they booked me that I prefer a more “documentary” approach for the most part and they gave me a complete free hand apart from their short list of “must have” shots.
They were very easy to work with and I was delighted that the torrential rain had stopped by the end of the ceremony. It was still windy (well spotted), but manageable.
I delivered the final images to the bride and I’m happy (and enormously relieved) to report that she’s very happy.