Your getting there, keep it up, I have the same setup as you have and these are very like my first shots. Keep taking the shots try to get down a little, face on with your subject. I find my photos get better the more I practice.
Thank you shutterbug, this little guy was on the bonnet of my car, so i could not use the tripod, so i just rested the camera and lens on the car. Canon 7d, Canon 100mm macro, 3 extention rings and a ring flash.