I really like this as well. If I had one criticism it would that the foreground clock is a little underexposed. I would of done a bit of dodging on the clock face just to bring it up a bit. Not too much though.
Yep, she does look awkward plus she’s not smiling. For me, the conversion is a little harsh given the child looks like a brand new baby. If it was a little softer (or warmer) I think it might look more natural (in my opinion).
I like this but the rocks in foreground seem too dark, in my opinion (could be my monitor) but other that that, it’s a nice image.
I like the timing of the sunset, you captured it just as it was about to disappear. Did you hang around after sunset? You often get nice a nice glow in the sky at that point.
I had a main and a fill. Since they are both 500W strobes, the fill was set to 2 and the main was set to 3.2 (I think), ie set quite low as the shoot was done in my sitting room. Both lights were at approx 45 degrees to the kids and at about head height. The background was a dark blue sheet set about 3ft behind the kids but since my shutter speed was set to 1/250s and no strobe light fell on the background, it effectively came out black. I just hung it over the curtain rail that was already there.
From the sounds of it you bought the exact same kit that I purchased from Gunn. It was a lot of fun. Can’t wait to do some more, maybe using (pure) white background for some high key shots.
Another option (if available) is to find couples that don’t have a huge budget set aside for a photographer and offer to to it for free as a way to get started. That way, you may not be under the same pressure as a full professional (€€€) shoot.
I’m hoping to do a shoot in Italy next year for some family members on my wife’s side. A few years back I tagged along side the photographer of my brothers wedding (also in Italy funnily enough) and got some nice shots after the main photographer set up the shot first of course :) He didn’t seem to mind either but I made sure to stay out of his way.
Fill light can be achieve a number of ways. If you adjust the power of your flash to be a little under normal strength and use it when taking the picture it can help brighten the foreground, especially if there’s strong/harsh sunlight. You can also use a white card to reflect some of the light back into the models face to reduce the shadows etc. Not always convenient though when out and about.
You could also use Lightroom or PS to increase the fill light during processing.
I’m sure there are other ways to increase fill light.