Sinead,all RAW images are going to look soft. You need to sharpen them at least a little. Also the light in both these photos is not great for this sort of test.
Thanks guys for the coments. My goal was to mix the ambient light and the flash and get a natural image. There was plenty of ambient so only a little flast was required.
Soft box in front, umbrella to side and perhaps an sb800 just to trigger the flash units.
Very little post production little contrast, sharpening and some spot healing.
Simon thanks for the link to the wedding I enjoyed going through the photos. Would love some more detail. What flash set up did you use mostly? What happened to the camera?
Thorsten, thanks for the link, will be having a go at this sometime.
I have been impressed with all the photos that have been posted here from Saturday, At the time I was talking to Ross he was trying a Gary Fong Light Sphere, Did you use that on all these shots Ross?
I have been looking through my own shots and I am surprised at how many photos I think are worth further work. I decided to shoot RAW on Saturday as I have been trying Capture One and wanted some material to work on, also the light was changing every few moments as the sun went back and forth between the clouds. I think capture One is a great programme and I like the results, anyone else have any comments on Capture One?
Three great shots Thorsten, I like the treatment on the third is this cross processed? Do you have an action for this or have you done something in addition to cross processing, would like to know more, I cant get mine to look look this. Is it desaturated in places. the more I look the more I like it.
Thorsten That would be great if you posted here, I am not as familiar with the other sites and was not sure where to post. I have some more shots that i will post also asap. How did you get on in the studio on Sunday?
Sometimes I feel as if I carry to much gear with me at these type of events, compared to others. I had my camera bag, a light stand and a tripod.
I used the tripod to mount my off camera flash and a large shoot through brolly, and it was very stable even with the wind i used the ebay triggers and they worked perfectly for a while and then i got some miss-fires. I would like to get some pocket wizards for this job.
I love this type of location shooting, and including the speedlights when necessary, and hope do do lots more in the future. The Strobist blog is just fantastic.
Gemma is only sixteen and she was very easy to work with. I am relatively inexperienced when it comes to working with models, and although I am comfortable enough with the techinical stuff the whole directing bit is something I need more work on. Gemma made the day very easy for me in that respect.
Rob how would you suggest fixing the eyes in photoshop?
Aiden the third shot has a lost feel to it which I like, I am trying to get away from the standard nice expression that i would normally go for. I know it is not flattering for the model but I think it has more emotion that the other shots and makes you ask more questions than the others